Very, Very Nice!
This is really great! If I were you, I'd made a sequel on this. You really got a good storyline, awesome graphics, and some nice drawing skills over there!
I really, really hope you make a sequel and it becomes a series, because it's worth it. No kidding.
Correct me if I spelled something wrong, I'm not English.
Awesome dude! When he goes extra fast, it really gives me an awesome feeling. The wind that slides on your back... The sound of the wind in your ears... You're awesome! To give the the viewer such a good feeling.
When you killing the dogs and the squirels, it's hard to dodge the birdpoo... And the controls are a bit hard to master.
But I have to admit, graphics are good, the idea is original and the music is good too.
This is a kind of an addictic game. I could do it for hours, not that it's healthy. But it's really fun to do it.
My score was : 54
Dude! This is awesome! It's great to see what has which size, and with what you can compare them to. But still, if that little thing wasn't there, nothing was the same. So everything, whatever it's size, has effect on everything else.
PS. You choose the perfect music for this. Though it's from Spore.
You did a really got job at this! I've got nothing to say about the drums, they are perfect the way they are! The tune that starts to fade in at 0:14 is good too, it builds very well up! But at 0:50 the pause is a tiny bit too long, I can't tell exactly how. And I don't think the bass suits this song very well at 0:53, but then at 1:08 it sounds better. If I were you I'd make it a bit more glitchy, that's the only thing that bothers me a bit :)
So, in general, EPIC! But you need to do some finishing touches to get the full effect. I'm sure this can be something good!
Thanks for this feedback! What exactly don't you like about the bass? Do you think it does not fit to the rythm? Or do you not like the sound of the bass? Im pretty bad at equalizing, I'm not really happy with how the bass sounds at the moment myself :/
Yeah of course I will do some finishing touches, this is just what I did in 3-4 hours yesterday evening, I'm planning to make this track probably about 4 minutes long and ofcourse I have to add some more background noises and maybe some pads / sound effects, cause it sounds a little bit empty on some places.
In the beginning I had the idea it was more going to be an electro song than a rock song, but at 0:16 I got convinced it's a rock song. The main refrain is more happy than bad-ass, which is different from most rock songs, and I really like that! The kicks that come in at 0:08 are good and not too complicated. The part from 0:32 to 0:48 are missing some vocals though. It could just be me, but I think every rock song should have some vocals in it. They don't really need to be about something, but just some words that make sense.
Anyways, you did quiet well on this one!
This is really good! But I want to give you some advise, on certain parts of the song. The intro should be a bit longer without the main loop as a start, or if you want it to start with it, you need to make the intro quiet a bit shorter.
When the bass comes in, I'd like it to be a bit more deeper. And a bit later at 0:25 I would make the main loop cut off between the brakes. Or you could make the reverb take some more time.
I don't really have anything to say further more, because the song so far is just great!
Also, a question. Is you real name Max?
Thanks for the advice! No my name is actually Gray... go figure
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